tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3105761276436330316.post3812728292243747112..comments2015-03-26T22:58:09.800-07:00Comments on Tony is the Best: BREACH (Part I of the Adrift Series)They Call Me Tonyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03020191181562865057noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3105761276436330316.post-76690018148081105632015-03-26T22:58:09.800-07:002015-03-26T22:58:09.800-07:00Pretty much. I didn't do an amazing job at est...Pretty much. I didn't do an amazing job at establishing the story because I never intended to write more than 5 or 6 pages, but that's what I'm aiming for in the sequels and stuff. More backstory, some flashbacks maybe, the works. Thanks for reading and giving feedback!They Call Me Tonyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03020191181562865057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3105761276436330316.post-5287002832524432042015-03-26T22:54:56.712-07:002015-03-26T22:54:56.712-07:00It has a great storyline, but it needs to be flesh...It has a great storyline, but it needs to be fleshed out a bit more. About halfway through, so much was happening that I got confused and couldn't take it all in. Though, I imagine that's how the characters feel too.Rachelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07507642753163503531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3105761276436330316.post-46008675443189079402015-03-26T21:27:01.822-07:002015-03-26T21:27:01.822-07:00Haha, don't worry, they're completely fict...Haha, don't worry, they're completely fictional! Thank you very much for taking the time to read them.They Call Me Tonyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03020191181562865057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3105761276436330316.post-70681557619052911872015-03-26T21:24:05.579-07:002015-03-26T21:24:05.579-07:00Rachel sent me. Your stories feel real, and they s...Rachel sent me. Your stories feel real, and they scare me a little bit. It's okay. I'm easily frightened. <br /><br />Love,<br />JanieJanie Junebughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10573607241326291404noreply@blogger.com